Sample essay 1 with admissions feedback October 19, 2019 8 By Stanley Isaacs CategoryArticles BlogTagsapply for financial aid apply to college applying for financial aid applying to college college college admissions College admissions in the United States college application financial aid getting financial aid getting into college guidance counselor Khan Academy paying for college university University and College Admissions 8 Comments VM says: September 13, 2017 at 7:45 pm What essay bro? Reply Bishan Shourie says: September 18, 2017 at 1:15 pm I'm so dumb; I don't know what to write; this video was BAKEDVIdVILLE Reply Omar Rodriguez says: October 5, 2017 at 12:57 am All they want is drama Reply Linda Steyn says: January 12, 2018 at 3:12 am Thank you for this info. It will help greatly. Yea, we need a lot of help to be admitted into college. I use this service, www.admissionessayspecialists.com Admissions professionals and Ivy graduates help and assist you, they have a lot of ideas and they edit your papers. That was a great help for me. Reply TheThelorac says: August 11, 2018 at 3:56 am Wtf I went into this thinking it was a video from the onion and I was so confused when this person made sense Reply Andre Lee says: September 20, 2018 at 5:56 am Thinks the student should get to the point faster, but the admissions officer took quite a while herself. Reply David Cherelin says: March 4, 2019 at 5:28 am This was a near useless video. I watched a video earlier where an admissions officer talked about memorable essays about losing a parent, the death of a friend, dealing with divorcing parents…. So is the only way to get noticed on a college essay is to survive an awful event? Maybe i should jump off a bridge so my son can have something to write about. WTH, can someone do a video about a good college essay that's not discussing a Phoenix story. Not everyone has one of those in their back pocket. Reply Rainuriftiann EhziraElwancen says: May 1, 2019 at 9:32 am no. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment.